Wednesday, October 21, 2015

Butterfly Scene










Scene Description Nixie

Success Criteria
  • Has strong adjectives
  • Different sentence beginnings
  • Different sentence lengths
  • A simile and/or alliteration
  • Has an introduction, body and conclusion
  • Thoughtful word choices
  • Show examples of single, compound and complex sentences.

As I turn around I see the most amazing thing.It’s so magical.So colorful - it looks like a rainbow.It’s outstanding. I've never seen anything like it .I’ve only seen monarch butterflies before. So delicate. It could almost blend in with the flower it’s on. It’s like being on a colorful island. It’s the most amazing scene.The  rainbow butterfly clutching onto the flower is such a beautiful sight.It has the most magnificent colors. In the back of the scene there is green grass in a blurry distance. A sunny, peaceful, relaxing space. Could this get more colorful? It looks like a rainbow. Well blended. Red,orange,yellow,green,light blue,dark blue,purple,pink,fuchsia,
lavender. It's so precious.


In my learning,we have been doing scene description.We got to pick any image within reason.I chose a butterfly.Next we had to describe the image to the reader.













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